Tuesday 31 October 2017

Kearny the Maleficent

Unlike an earlier example, this is an actual plagiarism piece. That is to say, TFSmith actually ripping off a real author. And the implications go wider, though not hugely wide. So even if you skipped the earlier example, I'd suggest sticking with this one.

TFSmith's depiction of the battle at Saint-Barthelemy in Chapter 9, part 6 steals from various different sources at various different stages of the battle. Some of these thefts do not even make sense. For instance, we are told that 'Peabody’s brigade soon saw a startling sight – scores of rabbits rushing toward their line.'. However, this is an incident from Chancellorsville: in Canada the rabbit isn't found as far north as Saint-Barthelemy.

Some are just basic paraphrases that show clear common ground. From the National Park Civil War Series: The Battle of Shiloh:
Although suffering four wounds, Peabody remained on the field, attempting to rally his troops. He suddenly threw up his arms, reeled back, and fell dead from his horse—a fatal bullet had struck him in the head.
Burnished Rows of Steel:
In the midst of the furious assault, Peabody, wounded four times, was seen to throw up his arms, reel back, and fall dead from his mount. His riderless horse ran wildly across the line, stirrups flapping in the air.
TFSmith also steals some primary source material from the same website, conflating two letters about Shiloh into one:
His use of the text makes it all too clear where he found the quotations
However, other sections are lifted directly and without credit from other authors. From Greg Goebel's The American Civil War, chapter 19.2:
By about 3:00 PM, troops from Brigadier General Darius N. Couch's division and Phil Kearny's division had managed to stop the rebel flood. Kearny rode unscathed through the fighting, encouraging his men and enjoying himself. When a colonel asked him where to deploy his regiment, Kearny replied: "Oh, anywhere! 'Tis all the same, Colonel, you'll find lovely fighting along the whole line."
Burnished Rows of Steel:
By about 3:00 PM, troops from both Prentiss’ division and Buford’s brigade were deeply engaged with the heavier British line. Kearny rode unscathed through the fighting, encouraging his men and apparently enjoying himself immensely. When Colonel Hugh Reid asked him where to deploy his regiment, the 15th Iowa, Kearny replied: "Oh, anywhere! 'Tis all the same, Colonel, you'll find lovely fighting along the whole line."
Mr Goebel states 'I reserve all rights to my writings. However, if anyone does want to make use of my writings, just contact me, and we can chat about it. I'm lenient in giving permissions, usually on the basis of being properly credited.' However, TFSmith does not mention his name anywhere in the timeline. As such, this is categorically plagiarism.

Not satisfied with converting Irving Werstein's Kearny the Magnificent into Irma Werstein's Kearny the Magnificient, TFSmith also copies and pastes sections from the original:
At one place Kearny came upon a company of Michigan men from his Third Brigade. Instead of shooting, the men were huddled in a bunch under the dripping trees.
"What's this? Why aren't you in action?" he demanded in a terrible voice.
"Sir, we don't know where the enemy is!" an officer said.
"You don't know! Then, find out! Here, I'll show you!" With that Kearny spurred across the field to a copse about a hundred yards away. Instantly, rifles crackled at him from one end of the woods to the other. Bullets kicked up spurts of mud all around, but he raced back unharmed.
"There!" he shouted pointing. "There's the target! Now go in and kick those rebels out!"
 BROS:
As Reid’s men went in, Kearny found a company of the Iowans in line, but not in action.
“What’s this? Why aren’t you firing?” Kearny demanded.
“Sir, we don’t know where the enemy is,” a sergeant replied.
“You don’t know? Then, find out! Here, I’ll show you!”
With that, Kearny spurred across the field to a copse about a hundred yards away, right on the riverbank. Instantly, rifles crackled at him from one end of the small grove to the other. Bullets kicked up spurts of dirt all around, but he raced back, reins in his teeth and revolver in his one good hand.
“There!” he shouted pointing. “There’s the target! Now fire, and drive those redcoats out!”

Notice, however, how subtle the changes in the text are. Historically, Kearny asked his men why they weren't 'in action', and urged them to 'go in', presumably with the bayonet. But in TFSmith's mind, only the British are stupid enough to fight with cold steel. As a result, 'in action' becomes 'firing,' 'go in' becomes fire', and 'kick out' with physical contact becomes 'drive out' with the force of their musketry. Similarly, Confederates were allowed to come within 125 yards of the Union line at Shiloh historically, but the Union start firing on the British at 200 yards at Saint-Barthelemy.

Like his namesake Winston, TFSmith carefully reconstitutes the past to turn it into a more palatable version. Unlike the Party, however, he lacks the power to destroy the original versions.

5 comments:

  1. Kearny has a very incompetent general. He was ridiculously rich and essentially bought his rank. First he bought his way into a Commission without training, and being untrained spent three years as an ADC to the brigade commander. He was then one of three subalterns sent to the French cavalry school, but he was dropped from training after six weeks and spent the year carousing in Paris. He then paid a brief visit to Algeria and returned to the US.

    After another 5 years of being an ADC, this time to Scott, he tries to resign his Commission and purchase a captaincy in the new Mounted Rifles. This is rebuffed, and he "unresigns" as the Mexican war starts, but his regiment bins him. His company is reduced to zero strength and he is assigned to a recruiting office whilst the regiment goes to war. Kearny is rich however, and simply hires 120 mercenaries and equips them at his own expense. Abraham Lincoln is the lawyer engaged to sort out the contracts. To everyones shock, Kearny turns up in Mexico with 120 horse. His regiment still doesn't want him, and after due consideration he's assigned to guard Scott's HQ.

    On the approach to Mexico City the Mexicans put up a defence along the Churubusco river. Kearny's troop (Coy F, 1st Dragoons) and McReynold's troop (Coy K, 3rd Dragoons) were Scott's part of Scott's escort, but facing a major battle Scott detached both his escort squadrons (the other under Capt Ker with a troop of the 2nd Dragoons and one of the Mounted Rifles) to Harney.

    Pillow's infantry having overrun an outpost, Harney launched the two squadrons to pursue, and then sounded the recall as they approached the enemy main defensive position. Most of the cavalry obeyed, but Kearny ignored the bugle signal (later admitting he heard it after claiming he hadn't) and tried to attack the enemy main position with just 24 sabres. He was dropped by the first volley of canister about 400 yards short and was carried back by Dick Ewell. He lost his arm from the wound.

    He was then posted to New York as a recruiter, but tried to rejoin for an expedition in California in 1851, but he arrived after it was over. He then resigned his Commission.

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  2. He spent the next eight years split between his palace in New Jersey, and a palace he rented in Paris. In 1859 he offered his services for the Austrian War and was accepted as a volunteer ADC to the commander of the Guard Cavalry. At Solferino he made an excuse and deserted his post to play at being a private soldier on the skirmish line. He was bollocked for it, but still received the War Commemoration Medal in 1859, and as a foreigner was approved to receive the Legion of Honor, 5th class in Feb. 1860 (which he never picked up and the citation simply reads "Major in the US Army").

    Back in the US he offers his services to NY as a general, but his offer is declined. After appealing to Scott the state of NY offers him the Colonelcy of the 1st NY Cavalry. Kearny tries holding out for better offers, and finally gets an offer of a brigade from New Jersey four months into the war.

    In March his brigade is furthest forward and he gets intelligence that the rebels are abandoning Manassas and Centreville. He tells no-one, but leads his brigade out to try and gain the glory of seizing it himself. He arrives at Manassas to find McClellan and 2 regiments of Pennsylvania Cavalry already there, but proclaims loudly that he alone chased away the whole enemy army with one regiment (3rd NJ) and was first into Manassas.

    With a reshuffle in commands as corps commanders move up, creating space for new division commanders, Kearny is offered a division. He refuses, and demands McClellan reorganise the army to give him a different division. Lincoln at the same time asks whether Richardson could be given a division, and so McClellan accepts Kearny's refusal and assigns that division to Richardson. Kearny fumes.

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  3. In early May McClellan fires Hamilton. As senior brigadier in the army Kearny is offered the division and grudgingly accepts. A few days later he leads 5 regiments into the Battle of Williamsburg. There he's found to be totally inept as a battlefield commander, making no attempt to command his whole force, and simply launching unco-ordinated company level bayonet charges into an entrenched enemy division. When McClellan reaches the field he finds Hancock has created a lodgement on the rebel left, but Sumner is refusing to exploit it. Within 15 minutes he launches 3 divisions through the gap Hancock held open and routed the enemy army. McClellan gives Hancock credit (making the name "Hancock the Superb"), but Kearny insists that since he managed to get most casualties it proves he did the fighting.

    At Seven Pines, Kearny again makes little attempt to command his division, and Heintzelmann ends up personally commanding it (commenting that "Kearny forgets he is a general"). Kearny rides around ordering little charges all of which are repulsed, and opening a large gap in the Federal lines when he countermands his corps commanders orders and pulls a brigade out of line.

    His last engagement on the Peninsula is at Glendale, where he takes up a position far in advance of the battle line, and spends hours refusing to withdraw to his appointed position. Heintzelman has to put in his reserve division, McCall, to fill the hole. McCall's division was very weak and they crack. Meanwhile, Kearny is approached by a single enemy brigade (once back in the line) and panics, begging for reinforcements whilst the main fight is a mile south.

    During 2nd Bull Run Kearny starts refusing to obey Pope's orders. Finally, he launches his own attack in the wrong place, a day late, and his division is butchered due to his poor handling.

    Finally, at Chantilly Kearny rides upto a regiment of Stevens Division (having abandoned his own) who report the enemy is in ambuscade in a wheat field to their front, producing prisoners their skirmishers had captured. Kearny screams at them and orders a battery to put canister into the Federals for cowardice (which is refused). He then rides into the field on his own and triggers the ambush. He is shot in the rectum and killed.

    Kearny is a spoilt rich boy who fancied himself a hero but had no talent for command. He was overpromoted as a captain of cavalry, and makes Lord Cardigan look positively sane.

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  4. You really wouldn't get that impression from his Wikipedia entry https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philip_Kearny
    Odd that?
    (Sorry for some reason the formatting has gone nuts?)

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  5. Kearny's family was powerful and funded, or produced for themselves a series of hagiographies and court histories. They brook for no criticism of the family patriarch.

    Sears recently wrote an article on Kearny: https://issuu.com/civilwarmonitor/docs/cwm_spr_2014_lowres_trimmed_final

    Reading this reminds me that actually Kearny again abandoned command of his division at Glendale, and Heintzelman was compelled to personally assume command of it again.

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